Hey i was curious if you guys could read my poem and let me know if its good or not...?

It is pretty good, but I'd shorten the lines on some of them, and make the words flow more. I like the theme of the poem, like, why are we here. The first thing I noticed though, is that the first line is part of Jack Johnson's song, Sitting, Waiting, Wishing. You might want to change that, but it's up to you.